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August 20, 2008

The 6 Traits of Writing

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IN this class we’ll do a lot of talking about the 6 Traits of Writing.  These traits are designed to help you be a better writer.  So, pay attention to them and apply them to your writing as best as you possibly can.  Being a good, effective writer, will help you in life beyond these four walls.  Here they are: 

1) Ideas and Content (IC) – what NEW ideas will you be writing about?  It’s best to write about things you know and have experience with.  If you have never been skiing, it would be difficult to write about this experience.  Brainstroming is one great tool for creating strong IC.

2) Organization (OR) – oh, that thing!  Organization is very important for the reader to understand your great ICs.  If your writing is scattered and disorganized, the reader will be confused.  A confused reader is often a frustrated reader.  When you are writing, use your brainstorms (IC) to cluster information into categories.  Each new category or idea is a new paragraph.  Some paragraphs can be one sentences in length, other are a bit longer.  Being organized is a critical part to being a good writer. 

3) Voice (V) – a voice is unique to you.  When I read your writing, I want to HEAR your voice in my head.  Voice will make your writing honest and sincere. (Have your ever being skiing? ) Your voice should show who you are with humor, sincerity, excitement, and suspense.  You must also consider your word choice (WC) when developing your voice.  Would you honestly say canine when you mean dog?  If not, then don’t use it in your writing because you think it sounds better – - often times it doesn’t.   

4) Word Choice (WC) – this is tough for young writers.  Word choice refers to the language (the words) being used in writing.  Writers need to consider the best words possible when writing.  One of the most over used words in writing is the word SAID.  Instead, students can use words like “commented”, “replied”, “whispered”, and so on.  Using words that had interest to your writing is very important to developing your WC. 

5) Sentence Fluency (SF) – refers to how well your sentences flow together.  Think of this like a puzzle.  Not all  pieces are the same size or shapes.  Neither should your sentences be.  Some should be shorter and to the point.  Others should be longer adding details and interest.  Pay attention to the first word of each sentence.  Do all of your sentences start with the same word? By changing up the sentence structure, you can add fluency to the writing. 

6) Conventions (C)- ugggg!  The big one – spelling and grammar!  Unfortunately, this counts double on the State Writing Test.  That’s why we spend so much time on this in class.  By understanding rules of spelling and grammar, you’ll be better prepared to be a better editor for your writing.  We’ll be doing a lot (notice that this is TWO WORDS – a lot), of this in class.  Also, students who read more do better with conventions.  The idea is that our brains absorb good writing, including how words are spelled and how they are used with other words.  Give your brain, and writing, a boost – - read a good book just for fun.

Okay – your turn!

Student Response Questions:  (Homework) – complete sentences required. 

1) Why should students learn the 6 traits of writing?    Which do you feel the most important?

2) What is your opinion on Mrs. Rice’s writing here?  Have I followed the 6 traits?  If not, what areas am I weak in?  (Be honest, not mean! I appreciate your critical feedback on my writing, too.)

August 12, 2008

Welcome to 7th Grade Core

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Welcome back to school.  7th grade is certainly a bigger and badder experience than 6th grade.  So, just what is 7th grade core?  Well, essentially, it’s a combination of a ton of things – - reading, writing, social studies, socialization (that means talking), technologies, thinking, and even art and mathematics.  The skills you learn in this class will help you be a better students for years to come.  These skills will help you realize that there is a world beyond these walls.  This world is ever changing and, therefore, you will need to change with it.  This is a year of change and I hope you make a strong commitment to growing and being the best learner you can be. 

You will be expected to log onto the class blogs weekly and complete homework assignments.  Most of the assignments will ask you to post a comment or idea to questions that are asked.  As the year progresses, you’ll be asked to pose questions, find resources, and create your own learning.  I am excited to be apart of this living digital classroom.  There are, as you may have expected some “rules” you’ll be expected to follow.  If you choose to break the rules, you’ll be removed from the blogging experiment, required to complete the Life Manifesto, and could possibly ruin this for all. 

Here are my Expectations and Rules:

1) Be Respectful at all times ~ using a digital classroom is just like being IN class, Respect is of the utmost importance.

2) NEVER, and I MEAN NEVER, give out personal information on the Internet. This means first and last names, birthdays, addresses, phone numbers, and even MySpace accounts, email accounts, or the like.  For the sake of our class blogs (and others you may use while in school) I will give you a user name that is acceptable for this class. 

3) NEVER give out personal information such as location of where you live, play, hang-out, or the like.  The WWW is a WORLD WIDE WED.  We have some control at who looks at our stuff, but YOU have full control of what information is published by you. 

4) Use proper grammar and spelling ~ this is an academic setting.  Your language is what sets you apart from others – find a voice that is yours and use it properly.  If you are not sure if a word is spelled correctly or if grammar is used well, write your response in a word document first, use the spelling and grammar tools, then copy and paste it to the blog.  Udderwise it wuld be harde to relly underStand what UR tring 2 sai! P.S.  Netspeak is not allowed!

5) And, in case I was not clear earlier, NEVER give out personal information.  A violation of rules 2, 3, and 5, could be problematic. 

So, here we go!

Student Interactive Questions – (Homework)!  Complete sentences are required.  Do not start with the word Because.  Remember – find your voice. 

1) What is your opinion of using technology in school? 

2) Of the rules listed above, which is the most important? (ec: Did I forget something?)

Welcome!

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